32.3 Quilt
Easing the city from our shoulders,light has a life that moves in all directions. By your stillness you tell mecertain things it’s better not to know. The blood remembers longer than the heart.Time...
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Another gem. The title is perfect for this piecing together of strong images/ideas that somehow fit together to make a cohesive narrative. Really enjoyed that strong/gentle feeling of this. Makes me...
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I agree with Greta. I liked every stanza. Each one seems whole in itself, and lovely. But the poem really does add up to more than the sum of its parts. Lovely feeling here-- strong feelings, gentle...
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I will go back to the soil. Night is so beautiful I cannot sleep. this is a gorgeous couplet. I actually stayed awake all night last night with exactly this feeling. I would remove "is". The first...
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and the poem? I have the strangest feeling of not being answered lately.
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I'm sorry. But I know the poem you are talking about but I couldn't find it in the ibpc thread
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yeah, that's it! they first together. typo-- meant to type fit, but maybe it's prophetic . . .after you take out is, I'll put it in the sea.
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